Ooh this sounds chilling! I loved your sample; your writing is beautiful and poignant. Good luck in the contest!
Yay, thanks so much! To you too!
Another "read me with the lights on" tale I feel I must read. Fantastic opening! Good Luck!
:D Thank you! Good luck to you too!
You don't need feedback. This is AWESOME (and right up my ally you'd be on my shortlist if I were a judge)
The only suggest I have is trim the part about Rhiannon's mom because it just adds another character (maybe just say she vows to help and they take matters into their own hands) plus I think throwing knives bit could be more tense in the query. (Does it barely miss them?) But this is all pure opinion. If you didn't change a word you'd likely be fine.
LOVE! Good luck!
That was totally heartening! Thanks for taking a look!
Great entry. I'd never be able to read this with the lights out. Good luck in the contest.
Thanks Mia! Are you a fellow contestant? Will look for your entry...!
Hey there- great entry. The query definitely had me interested in how things will develop. I enjoyed the 250 as well.
Best of luck!
Awesome, thank you! Will look for you on the roster!
Good luck in the competition! (Are you on Twitter, btw?)
Thanks! :D And yes indeed, I'm @metuiteme - just followed you!
I could just hear creepy music in my head as I read this. Good luck!
This is really awesome. You've definitely upped the creepy factor! :) Good luck!
Yay, another horror writer! Although my #thewvoice entry is fantasy, I write horror too. Great first 250! Good luck!
fellow dabbler in academics and carpentry, I salute you! great opening, and good luck in the coming weeks.
Nice work. Great voice. Good luck with your manuscript!